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Corps Stories Loves 'Blood Stripes'!
By former Marine Captain David Danelo
(Interview with the author, August 2006)
Don't
pick this book up if you're interested in Iraq war strategy, armchair theory,
who's winning, who's losing. This read is about genuine American warriors
- via fact, not imagination.
"His heroes are regular American guys from Iowa and New Hampshire,
Kentucky and South Dakota. Not captains and generals, but NCO's." Steven Pressfield, author of "Gates of Fire" (required reading for all great Marines)
writes of "Blood Stripes" author Marine David Danelo.
In this nonfiction read, Capt. Danelo follows five young enlisted Marines
on that mysterious journey in which Marines display acts of courage - which most
of us will never display - then back to ordinary life at home.
He focuses on the part of this war which history will most examine:
conflicts in Fallujah, Ramadi and the on Syrian border in 2004.
Readers become a fly on the gear of these Marines, observing them from the
most innocuous events to absolutely harrowing warfare.
CS: First, Captain, how did you come to these particular Marines?
DD: One of the common cliches from the Iraq War is that
"everybody's Iraq is different." I wanted to capture what distinguished
the Al Anbar Province and the cities of Fallujah, Ramadi, and Husaybah from the
rest of the country. As far as the five main characters, I had either
worked with them at different times, or somebody I trusted linked me up with
them.
CS: In this work you reveal - like few other books have - the
secrets, nuances and politics of the enlisted infantry Marine. Doing so
made a huge difference for this reader's understanding. Was that a tough
call?
DD: Not at all. That was the whole point of the book: to
illuminate the world of enlisted Marines in Iraq for a broad readership, both
military and civilian. From "The Sands of Iwo Jima" to "Jarhead," popular
views of Marine culture are often sculpted inaccurately. I wanted to
portray their world as they saw it: the good, the bad, and the ugly.
CS: Despite the extremes of conditions that your book covers, from
human waste disposal to the complex thinking of a platoon leader while in
heavy combat, this book moves fast. How were you able to keep the pages
flying by?
DD: I studied story structure. Like building a house or
attacking a fortified position, there are certain dos and don'ts for the science
and art of storytelling. For me, a helpful book was "Story" by Robert
McKee. It is actually about screenwriting, but I found it useful for any
writer in the craft.
Also, I had some great mentors and advisors. Steven Pressfield, who is one
of the finest writers in America, had many helpful words of wisdom.
Nathaniel Fick, who wrote "One Bullet Away," offered several brilliant tips.
Agent. Editors. My wife. Like competitive running or cycling,
writing is solitary work, but also a team effort. Many came in at just the
right time to coach or share the important tidbit.
CS: In the first chapter you describe an aspect of the United
States Marine which I have never read so aptly put: In "Culture of
Order...Culture of Disorder" the heart and mind of Marines for past and
future centuries is defined. Tell about that writing.
DD: I wanted to frame the duality of Marine life. On the
one hand, Marines are pretty much expected to be perfect. But we also wink
at a kid when he can "just make it happen," often regardless of how far the
rules are bent. I believe that both of those elements are part of the
Corps...always have and always will be.
As a narrative device, I got the idea of capitalization from Tom Wolfe's "The
Right Stuff." At several points in his book, Wolfe refers to the culture
of naval aviation as "Flying & Drinking and Drinking & Driving." Whether
accurate or not, it worked well for the themes he was weaving throughout his
book. Wolfe's use of the technique made me think it might be effective for
Blood Stripes.
CS: Two officers are described in detail in this book, both of whom
are intriguing, Capt. Bill Anderson (a pseudonym) and MajGen James Mattis. Tell
why these two in particular stood out in your research.
DD: Mattis, who is now a LtGen, is the Marine grunt's hero in
this war. Capturing him and his effect on these young Marines was essential to
telling their story. Most of these guys will tell "I served with Mad Dog
Mattis" stories to their kids the way that old WWII vets talk about MacArthur or
Patton. Explaining the underpinnings of that respect was important.
Captain Anderson? Well, I'm afraid I can't say much about him. He
felt pretty strongly about staying out of the limelight. I do know that he
left active duty. He also stayed in touch with Shady, his driver.
Both of them are content with their current civilian life.
CS:
Finally, your exploration of the Marines and their relationships with
familiy members and other loved ones gives a clear picture of true sacrifice
from both ends. Tell about that research.
DD: That was both the most painful and the most rewarding.
I can't thank David & Kacey Carpenter and Nina Schrage enough. They deal
each day with the tragedy and agony of having lost a son. To share that
with the world took courage and generosity of spirit. They placed a lot of
trust in me to handle their stories, and I felt very honored that they did so.
In terms of the writing, those were some of the most difficult scenes to
approach. Brian Zmudzinski and I are pretty close, but I had to spend two
days with him at his house before he was ready to open up and talk about Dan
Amaya's death. Craig Atkins was the same way.
CS: This is a true Corps Stories Noteworthy Book. You have
revealed rhe ordinary Marine and his extraordinary life. I as founder, and my
readers, are very grateful. Semper Fi.